tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post7949106194873527491..comments2023-10-03T03:18:25.429-07:00Comments on Words in a Whirlwind: Grudge to GlareDragonRaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04575972727590566713noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post-59572276202235884612008-01-23T01:35:00.000-08:002008-01-23T01:35:00.000-08:00A lot of your poetry also reads like song lyrics. ...A lot of your poetry also reads like song lyrics. Are you a musician, or have you ever tried putting your words to music?Miss Ticket Stubshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00405240193433512782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post-29610556002428086372008-01-15T14:02:00.000-08:002008-01-15T14:02:00.000-08:00Oh, I love the last line!I can feel the torture an...Oh, I love the last line!<BR/>I can feel the torture and the pain, but there's hope. You know it yourself, don't you?<BR/>KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post-64298862312286586832008-01-14T23:08:00.000-08:002008-01-14T23:08:00.000-08:00If only when I felt this way...was just an ounce a...If only when I felt this way...was just an ounce as poetic as you are....very nice, you really caught the essence of the grudge, the twinge of bitterness and resentment are fluid...sorry I haven't been around for a while...I will have to read a lot to catch up...keep it up...as if you need to hear it...the gift of poetry and writting is more of a disease it eats at you until you just do it...Iwalkthelinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06397788759526722274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post-4163056218135537012008-01-14T20:22:00.000-08:002008-01-14T20:22:00.000-08:00Ah, I am trying to learn how to deal with my demon...Ah, I am trying to learn how to deal with my demons and stop running from them.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Great poem.HeatherrrEloisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10862301524447640475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5274324513039073553.post-417946491246298532008-01-13T06:36:00.000-08:002008-01-13T06:36:00.000-08:00Really like your writing...it's deep....not for th...Really like your writing...it's deep....not for the common reader.Mystery Womanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08921497005973678854noreply@blogger.com