I guess these words can't reach you
I don't know how far you are
I can't judge the distance
Between you and me
Between you and me
I would run
Around and around and around
In circles again
I'd do anything
Anything for you
But you walk away
Turn and walk away
One foot in front of the other
Put one foot in front of the other
Keep looking straight
Don't look back on the past
I'll fade
How many years has it been
Since you took my heart
And choked it to death?
Burned out my passion
And scattered the ashes?
Yet you stand before me today
My heart lays in bandages
I can't breathe
I can't speak
What words can I say
To make you understand me?
What words can I possibly say
To make you believe?
To make you feel my pain?
Here's a thought:
Goodbye
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- inspired by A Moment Suspended in Time by Underoath (2)
- inspired by All We Know is Falling by Paramore (1)
- inspired by Beautiful in Blue by Alesana (1)
- inspired by Beauty Through Broken Glass by Eyes Set to Kill (1)
- inspired by Bitter Pill by Eyes Set to Kill (1)
- inspired by Burnt Memories by Stutterfly (1)
- inspired by Bury Me (The Scarlet Path) by Stutterfly (1)
- inspired by Call Me a Sick Boy by Hopes Die Last (1)
- inspired by Cold Cash and Colder Hearts by Thrice (1)
- inspired by Come Close by Saosin (1)
- inspired by Congratulations I Hate You by Alesana (1)
- inspired by Division Street by Thursday (1)
- inspired by Eraser by Smile Empty Soul (1)
- inspired by Existentialism on Prom Night by Straylight Run (1)
- inspired by Falling Apart by TRUSTcompany (1)
- inspired by Feel the Pain by Dinosaur Jr. (1)
- inspired by Get Well Soon by Reggie and the Full Effect (1)
- inspired by Giving Up by Silverstein (1)
- inspired by Happy? by Mudvayne (1)
- inspired by Higinia by Blessthefall (1)
- inspired by Hoods on Peregrine by Thrice (1)
- inspired by In Regards to Myself by Underoath (1)
- inspired by Letters to You by Finch (1)
- inspired by Memory by A Heartwell Ending (1)
- inspired by Not a Single Word About This by Alesana (1)
- inspired by Not Good Enough for Truth or Cliche by Escape the Fate (1)
- inspired by Note to Self by From First to Last (1)
- inspired by Outside of This by Greeley Esates (1)
- inspired by Page Avenue by Story of the Year (1)
- inspired by Papercut by Linkin Park (1)
- inspired by Paradise Lost by Hollywood Undead (1)
- inspired by Poetically Pathetic by Amber Pacific (1)
- inspired by Price to Play by Staind (1)
- inspired by Remember the Name by Fort Minor (1)
- inspired by Rise by Flobots (1)
- inspired by Sleeping Awake by P.O.D. (1)
- inspired by Slip Out the Back by Fort Minor (1)
- inspired by Some of Your Favorite Words by From First to Last (1)
- inspired by The Last Three Letters by Alesana (1)
- inspired by The Red by Chevelle (1)
- inspired by The Thin Red Line by A Change of Pace (1)
- inspired by The Weak and the Wounded by Silverstein (1)
- inspired by This Conversation is Over by Alesana (1)
- inspired by Tilting the Hourglass by Alesana (1)
- inspired by Tip the Scales by Rise Against (1)
- inspired by Until the Day I Die by Story of the Year (1)
- inspired by Where the Highways End by Hidden in Plain View (1)
- inspired by Where'd You Go by Fort Minor (1)
- inspired by Young by Hollywood Undead (1)
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2 comments:
It's good to have passion in your writing, but you might give some thought to using forms other than blank verse now and then.
Rhyme and meter go a long way towards making a poem strike deeper into the reader.
Holy crap. You've completely destroyed my Friday. I feel like killing myself.
If this is what you were going for, then GOOD WORK!
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