Thursday, October 23, 2008

To See

I
Want to see
For myself
[You
Never
Said
Why]
(You just said)
That I had to learn
(Had to listen)
To your words
(Unfounded though) they were
[Spitting your lies]

Take me
Somewhere (far away)
Where your
Greedy
Fingers
[Can't reach]
(And) I
[Only want]
To see
[For myself]
Is that
(So hard
To) understand?

Your words
(Never made)
Any sense
(Useless)
Syllables
(I hear)

Are we
[So far]
Apart
[That we]
Can't un-
[-derstand]
(Each other?)

[I
Hate you
I hate
You
I hate you
Swallow] (your) lies

(Do you believe
That you are the
Only one to
Ever breathe?)
Well I've got
News for you
[Wake up
From
Your
Pity!]

Take me
Somewhere (far away)
Where your
Greedy
Fingers
[Can't reach]
(And) I
[Only want]
To see
[For myself]
Is that
(So hard
To) understand?
[Is it?]

1 comment:

xyn said...

your poem is good..i find it really interesting and i like the way you write.. im so much interested in poem writing too.. keep it up..! =)

i'll be following your blog.. thanks hahaha..=)



--cynthia.

Key/Legend

word = speaking/singing
(word) = whispering/echo
[word] = stern voice/screaming