Tuesday, December 11, 2007

Sympathy, Empathy

I'm waiting
Take my hand
And lead me
To your dreams
To the hopes
You hold
So dear in
Your heart

We're lacking

Tell me your fears
The reasons why
You shun the darkness
Why you hesitate
With every step
You take
Show me your memories
The images
That play
Over and over
And over again
In your mind

We're lacking

Lead me to
Your thoughts
Random musings
Of your mind
What are you thinking?
I will follow you
To your concerns
Do you worry
About what
Tomorrow holds?

We're lacking

As we come
To your heart
I feel
Perhaps starting
To understand
The other side

We're lacking


Devilbluedress said...

I like this. Would you share the same?

Earric said...

I like the structure of the poem, which is (at least in my mind)reflected by the word that you used, "hesitate." The whole form of the poem seems as if the speaker is hesitating at the end of each line, as if wondering if more should go there or not.

Very powerful. :3

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