Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Wishing

I wish I knew the right words to say
To make you feel better
Piece your heart together
I wish I could do something
Anything really
To bring a smile to your face
I wish I was there
To hold you in the frost of night
When you're all alone
I miss you...

3 comments:

Frederick said...

Top 5 material!!!!!! Its simplier than some of your other material and that's what makes it powerful.

noelia ~ said...

it's perfect. short, right to the point, excellent use of words. i love it

Shimmer said...

short n sweet :) a lil bit of a rhyme scheme wud make it perfect i suppose... but i liked this as it is...

cheers!

Key/Legend

word = speaking/singing
(word) = whispering/echo
[word] = stern voice/screaming