Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Dancing Leaves

Leaves dancing
Wind whispering
But I'm holding on
To each breath
Like it's my last
Worrying about
The next heartbeat
Lost in every
Single tiny thought
Occupied with wounds
That bleed ink
Onto paper
Leaves dance in the wind
Without a care in the world
What I would give for paradise...

4 comments:

Pallav said...

have linked you too :)

fallen leaves...u need to call the municipal department :P

N

The Ponderer said...

Simple, yet compelling.

Commissioner said...

To be honest, and I say this only because I respect your talents...... this one ends a bit careless. "What I would give for paradise..." yeah, and...

Commissioner said...

To be honest, and I say this only because I respect your talents...... this one ends a bit careless. "What I would give for paradise..." yeah, and...

Key/Legend

word = speaking/singing
(word) = whispering/echo
[word] = stern voice/screaming